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Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


You sigh her name,
A breath so deep,
That heartfelt blow,
A feeling I keep..

Words mentioned,
Emotions told,
My head and heart,
Begin to un-fold,

From somewhere within,
I keep holding on,
For I feel it's in your arms,
I belong..

But for the moment,
You breath so deep,
And sigh her name,
A feeling you keep..
©2006-2008 ~Gracies-Poetry
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Submitted: September 13, 2006
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Date Written: 2006

*Please be kind on my poems, as they are very personal*

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~UndeadGranola:iconUndeadGranola: Sep 13, 2006, 7:51:16 AM
omh, i love this poem!!!

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life is love, if you cannot love there is no reason for you to live.
~Gracies-Poetry:iconGracies-Poetry: Sep 13, 2006, 8:02:42 AM
Thank you very much, i'm glad you liked it :)

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I felt his lips, Upon my fingertips, I traced the moment.. & fell forever

Photography: ~slowly-falling-apart
Stock: =Gracies-Stock
Drawings: ~Gracies-Drawings
~noose-in-your-room:iconnoose-in-your-room: Sep 13, 2006, 8:32:53 AM
Well written, nice flow, good to see more work
~Gracies-Poetry:iconGracies-Poetry: Sep 14, 2006, 2:33:18 AM
Thanks hun, I will try to get writing more, I need to be feeling something pretty emotional to write alot. :hug:

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I felt his lips, Upon my fingertips, I traced the moment.. & fell forever

Photography: ~slowly-falling-apart
Stock: =Gracies-Stock
Drawings: ~Gracies-Drawings
!stacey-jayne-2005:iconstacey-jayne-2005: Sep 17, 2006, 10:29:55 AM
well written :)

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my new website [link] <------new site

I'll see you at the cemetery, and then we'll be together again.
If you care about the depressed copy and paste this sentence i
~Gracies-Poetry:iconGracies-Poetry: Sep 18, 2006, 7:47:52 AM
Thank you very much :)

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I felt his lips, Upon my fingertips, I traced the moment.. & fell forever

Photography: ~slowly-falling-apart
Stock: =Gracies-Stock
Drawings: ~Gracies-Drawings
!stacey-jayne-2005:iconstacey-jayne-2005: Sep 18, 2006, 8:30:23 AM
your welcome

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my new website [link] <------new site

I'll see you at the cemetery, and then we'll be together again.
If you care about the depressed copy and paste this sentence i
~Gracies-Poetry:iconGracies-Poetry: Sep 20, 2006, 6:14:10 AM
:)

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I felt his lips, Upon my fingertips, I traced the moment.. & fell forever

Photography: ~slowly-falling-apart
Stock: =Gracies-Stock
Drawings: ~Gracies-Drawings
!stacey-jayne-2005:iconstacey-jayne-2005: Sep 20, 2006, 6:33:13 AM
:)

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my new website [link] <------new site

I'll see you at the cemetery, and then we'll be together again.
If you care about the depressed copy and paste this sentence i
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