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Falling Behind 2006 by ~Gracies-Poetry:iconGracies-Poetry:



Being left out of a world,
I wish was mine,
Falling behind, Running away,
Loosing time..

Feeling alone & cold,
Wishing you were here,
Wishing I were there,
Calm my every fear..

But you're falling behind,
& Running away,
You're loosing time,
And un-willing to stay,

You don't feel the cold,
Or realise i'm not there,
Are you alone?
Do you ever wish you were here?

Tell me the real answer,
Do you wish your world was mine,
Or will you be forever running,
Leaving me behind...
©2006-2008 ~Gracies-Poetry
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Submitted: October 5, 2006
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Maybe life is meant to be hard.. I just don't want the only thing I find perfect to become un-done..

Date Written: 2006

*Please be kind on my poems, as they are very personal*

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~killertoothbrush:iconkillertoothbrush: Oct 6, 2006, 12:04:16 AM
:(

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~Gracies-Poetry:iconGracies-Poetry: Oct 11, 2006, 7:36:32 PM
Sorry sweetie :glomp:

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I felt his lips, Upon my fingertips, I traced the moment.. & fell forever

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~killertoothbrush:iconkillertoothbrush: Oct 12, 2006, 12:01:24 AM
:hug: sok

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~Gracies-Poetry:iconGracies-Poetry: Nov 21, 2006, 3:43:56 PM
:cuddle:

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I felt his lips, Upon my fingertips, I traced the moment.. & fell forever

Photography: ~slowly-falling-apart
Stock: =Gracies-Stock
Drawings: ~Gracies-Drawings
*meeden:iconmeeden: Jan 8, 2007, 1:47:19 PM
wonderfully expressed with deep emotions - that of love! :silentkitty: p.s. i think we all want love to stay not run away.
~Loganforever:iconLoganforever: Jan 9, 2007, 8:53:46 AM
Hey, nice poem! Very nice images and all that. i like it, but i think you could maybe work on the flow a little bit, it's patchy at best in many places.
Good luck!

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“To write the poem of the human conscience, if only of one man, even the most insignificant of man, would be to swallow up all epics in a superior and definitive epic.”
Victor Hugo
~lastinlove:iconlastinlove: Jan 9, 2007, 10:51:05 AM Mood: Joy
I once had a blog site where I posted relationship trouble "things"... It was named "iwishiwasthere.xxx.xxx" the name came from exactly the same feelings as expressed here. Well done!

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The soul would have no rainbow had the eyes no tears.
~megandurnford:iconmegandurnford: Jan 13, 2007, 2:50:11 PM
You don't feel the cold,
Or realise i'm not there,
i like that alot
mann the emotion hit me :)

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baby, seasons change, people dont
~Gracies-Poetry:iconGracies-Poetry: Jan 20, 2007, 8:50:09 PM Mood: Love
Thank you very much :heart:

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I felt his lips, Upon my fingertips, I traced the moment.. & fell forever

Photography: ~slowly-falling-apart
Stock: =Gracies-Stock
Drawings: ~Gracies-Drawings